sebasthian
Jan 24, 2014
Undergraduate / Learning from your challenges in life! [6]
you don't need to put "and" because you've put "that" as a clause.
you can use clause to combine 2 sentences into 1 sentence. so, you may delete "that" or "and".
make balance between present tense and past tense.
i think "can not" is a misspelling. the true is "cannot".
similar correction. balance between past and present tense.
their body languages
spoked?
i think "that" is the subject, and "the best way" is the object, so you must put "verb" between them.
them? who?
The three words that gives me chills and turn my legs into jelly.
you don't need to put "and" because you've put "that" as a clause.
you can use clause to combine 2 sentences into 1 sentence. so, you may delete "that" or "and".
As I slowly make my way up to the stand, my legs trembled, I stuttered as I spoke, and soon my face became red.
make balance between present tense and past tense.
Public speaking was the challenge I can not defeat.
i think "can not" is a misspelling. the true is "cannot".
After a few mortifying speeches later, I've had enough, it was time I step up and overcome this challenge. I started practicing in my room.
similar correction. balance between past and present tense.
I noticed some of my peers were nervous by their body language
their body languages
I spoked with more confidence; a huge improvement compared to my first speech.
spoked?
and that the best way to overcome my fear was to face them which enabled me to grow as an individual.
i think "that" is the subject, and "the best way" is the object, so you must put "verb" between them.
them? who?
