Writing Feedback / TOPic : Long distance flights use more fuel than cars & pollute the environment! [11]

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TOPic : Long distance flights use more fuel than cars and bring pollution to the environment. we should discourage nonessential flights rather than limit the use of car. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

Environmental pollution is an alarming issue to mankind among the world citizen. Especially in the area of transportation , the emitted gas that produced from the cars and planes. Some people are of the opinion long distance flights should be limited in the concern of car consume less amounts of fuel than plane. Hence confine to drive is not essential in term of environment. Personally i strongly disagree with this point of view. In aspect of green, limitation and nonessential use of transportation is required to have a green lifestyle. It is the duty to every one on the planet.

To begin with, the world advocate for green environment. The transportation industry should to take their actions and reponsibilities. For the sake of everyone can breath fresh air. By ways of illustrations the world fuel consumption is consumed mostly on airplane and car. Even though flights burn more fuel than car and produce more pollutent in the air. Flight can not take all the responsibility in the light of polluting environment. The society would be lose balance, if environmental friendly policies and regulations did not take in charge of car. It is inevitable that governments should make a jointly effort to enforce rules in order to improve air and environment.

Secondly reduction in number of vehicle is remarkable way to cut average liters of petrol use per person. Laying up the price of fuels that make it inelastic to population is also a effective measure. What's more, construction of convienient public transport can discourage unnecessary travel.

To be concluded, breathing fresh air is not one's responsibility but every one.