skmr
Feb 17, 2014
Essays / help me on creating my effective introduction for b-schools [3]
pls give ur views..
i have structured it in points and for each points i have ans ready of 30-60 sec mins.
(i take time to say.. therefore according to me . i compete it in 30 sec.
Good morning everyone, I am Sunita Kumari
1. I have completed my B.TECH in computer science and engineering from Raj Kumar Goel Institute of Technology at Ghaziabad which is affiliated to Uttar Pradesh Technical University.
2. My hobbies are listening music and I am fond of listening 92.7 BIG FM and my favouret show is "yaadon ka idiot box with Neelesh Misra"
3. I am good at art and craft, I have been doing this since 3rd standard . I have been artistic person in my college and school .
4. I enjoy dance , 20 min in my timetable is for "crazy dance" which I daily do.
5. sometimes I write and read novel.
6. I like to be social , graduation was the first time I was in hostel, it made me independent with limited budget, I was responsible for myself, there I get chance to interect with many people. I consider diversity the best teacher, it helped me to understand people better way. I learned many things there including sharing, caring, respect authority .
7. I have interest in conducting activities which I got after conducting some events during my college fest.
but my teacher said -"Please make your introduction bit interesting . This appears as if I am reading your CV, Your candidature needs to appear and be bit interesting for the selectors to hire you ."
so pls help me to structure it and in selection of words too.
pls give ur views..
i have structured it in points and for each points i have ans ready of 30-60 sec mins.
(i take time to say.. therefore according to me . i compete it in 30 sec.
Good morning everyone, I am Sunita Kumari
1. I have completed my B.TECH in computer science and engineering from Raj Kumar Goel Institute of Technology at Ghaziabad which is affiliated to Uttar Pradesh Technical University.
2. My hobbies are listening music and I am fond of listening 92.7 BIG FM and my favouret show is "yaadon ka idiot box with Neelesh Misra"
3. I am good at art and craft, I have been doing this since 3rd standard . I have been artistic person in my college and school .
4. I enjoy dance , 20 min in my timetable is for "crazy dance" which I daily do.
5. sometimes I write and read novel.
6. I like to be social , graduation was the first time I was in hostel, it made me independent with limited budget, I was responsible for myself, there I get chance to interect with many people. I consider diversity the best teacher, it helped me to understand people better way. I learned many things there including sharing, caring, respect authority .
7. I have interest in conducting activities which I got after conducting some events during my college fest.
but my teacher said -"Please make your introduction bit interesting . This appears as if I am reading your CV, Your candidature needs to appear and be bit interesting for the selectors to hire you ."
so pls help me to structure it and in selection of words too.