fidcuevas
Feb 24, 2014
Graduate / Georgetown MS Finance, "Why should we admit you?", AKA how bad is this from 1 - 10 [2]
Hello everyone,
I have severe writer's block in deciding what to write for my essay. The prompt asks only to address 1. why Georgetown, 2. why a MS finance, 3. why I should be admitted and 4. my career objectives. The truth is that I want a degree to address my weak undergrad career, learn classroom finance skills, and start a career in investment management. I'm wondering: does this essay convey any of that? I'm a terrible writer and would like to hear opinions on this and what your general thoughts are.
It is 1.5 pages, single spaced 12-pt font, not a long read. Please let me know your thoughts!
Hello everyone,
I have severe writer's block in deciding what to write for my essay. The prompt asks only to address 1. why Georgetown, 2. why a MS finance, 3. why I should be admitted and 4. my career objectives. The truth is that I want a degree to address my weak undergrad career, learn classroom finance skills, and start a career in investment management. I'm wondering: does this essay convey any of that? I'm a terrible writer and would like to hear opinions on this and what your general thoughts are.
It is 1.5 pages, single spaced 12-pt font, not a long read. Please let me know your thoughts!
