fidcuevas 1 / - Feb 24, 2014 #1Hello everyone,I have severe writer's block in deciding what to write for my essay. The prompt asks only to address 1. why Georgetown, 2. why a MS finance, 3. why I should be admitted and 4. my career objectives. The truth is that I want a degree to address my weak undergrad career, learn classroom finance skills, and start a career in investment management. I'm wondering: does this essay convey any of that? I'm a terrible writer and would like to hear opinions on this and what your general thoughts are.It is 1.5 pages, single spaced 12-pt font, not a long read. Please let me know your thoughts!
aldebaran 8 / 17 2 Feb 25, 2014 #2Hi, I like your essay. However, if I were you I would follow the following structure:1. My my career objectives2. MS finance (how this MS help me to reach my point 1. I )3. why Georgetown4. why I should be admittedI see in your essay some mix of these point in several paragraphs.Hope this helpGood luck.