Writing Feedback / Advantage of mass communication in the 21st century [6]

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Today we are living in the 21st century. It will not be exaggerated to say that media has influenced every aspect of our life. Due to the advancement in technology various means of mass media is coming into existence.

Mass media play a numerous roles in modern world. Considering, in terms of entertainment role of TV cannot be forgotten. It is not only the efficient source of entertainment, but also the cheaper one . Hardly we can find any social family who is not getting entertained through TV. It has drastically bought down the cultural and lingual barriers between two nations. Besides this, TV play a much appreciable role in spreading news and updating news across the world and thus it is a import part of today's world.

Secondly in terms of communication, share of mass media is para excellence. Due to advance in internet technology and mobile communication we are in continuous touch of all events happening around the world. Internet has broadened the frontier of knowledge by dispensing us a big spectrum of knowledge. For instance, today we can access any short of article of any subject right from your home and hence, or communication world has been transformed to a great extent.

In conclusion, by seeing above discussion, i agree with notion that mass communication is one of the back bones of this century and plays an import role in our daily life.