Asia97
Apr 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / Many teachers assign homework to students every day. 'Valuable exercise' [9]
you should add to another side.
you should add to another side.
Asia97
Apr 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: Parents are the best teachers? No - the experience is. [4]
Who is the best teacher? This question is difficult to answer for me. It is like "Which one do you love your parents?" . But there is an answer after i think accurately. However there are a lot of good teachers, I wanna write the best teachers.
First one is my parents.If we imagine that life is a building ,my parents helped to make foundation . My parents taught elementally things such as how to speak,walk,live and communicate each other.My parents are always with me when I give up something ,have a problem, and be happy .Therefore; my parents here, I have successful in my life. So my parents are good teachers.
Another one is an experience. After we made foundation , we need to construct a building by using experience from obtaining life. This is the tremendous concept that includes the parents . Everyone knows that Thomas Edison invented the lamp.So do you know his parents?Maybe his parents were good people.But he didn't find his fame from only his parents advise ,behavior , or knowledge. He could find out by making lot of experiments,persistence,knowledge and intelligence.
However it is very important to make foundation , the process of a building is the the most important thing. Similar to I think, the experience is the best teacher however the parents are good teachers.
Who is the best teacher? This question is difficult to answer for me. It is like "Which one do you love your parents?" . But there is an answer after i think accurately. However there are a lot of good teachers, I wanna write the best teachers.
First one is my parents.If we imagine that life is a building ,my parents helped to make foundation . My parents taught elementally things such as how to speak,walk,live and communicate each other.My parents are always with me when I give up something ,have a problem, and be happy .Therefore; my parents here, I have successful in my life. So my parents are good teachers.
Another one is an experience. After we made foundation , we need to construct a building by using experience from obtaining life. This is the tremendous concept that includes the parents . Everyone knows that Thomas Edison invented the lamp.So do you know his parents?Maybe his parents were good people.But he didn't find his fame from only his parents advise ,behavior , or knowledge. He could find out by making lot of experiments,persistence,knowledge and intelligence.
However it is very important to make foundation , the process of a building is the the most important thing. Similar to I think, the experience is the best teacher however the parents are good teachers.
Asia97
Apr 2, 2014
Writing Feedback / Your teamwork experience that you have learned the most from (300ws) [3]
you should write interesting thing in introduction part.
you should write interesting thing in introduction part.
Asia97
Mar 27, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL: 'my rest time' - Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life [7]
Now, I am teenager and just 17 years old. So I don't have a lo of life experiments. But I read some books about true of life .Consequently, I write my oppinion.
There are 2 oppinions of this argument.First one is maybe true. Because I am graduating class and I have to do so many things such as to search my university to ,choose these, to fill out application form and to take entrance exam .I have little time to do these thigs perfectly.So I think that childhood is the moat pleasant time.This time ,I used to play outside from morning to evening and didn't have much problem.Most important thing is that there wasn't any dishonesty thing,envy and anxiety.
Otherwise,life is mystety box.It isn't stable or understable .Noone knows what will happen in the future.I wonder what the box has in.So it's more interting than past time.Actually,person can reach the wanted life by trying a lot. I believe myself to achive good things.For example,to finish universty, to have children, get marry and to do good things for society.Thetefore; I prefer to the unknown thing in future time than the happiest time in the past.
Finally, I think about although childhood is happy time of life ,I will see more nice things for my rest time.
Now, I am teenager and just 17 years old. So I don't have a lo of life experiments. But I read some books about true of life .Consequently, I write my oppinion.
There are 2 oppinions of this argument.First one is maybe true. Because I am graduating class and I have to do so many things such as to search my university to ,choose these, to fill out application form and to take entrance exam .I have little time to do these thigs perfectly.So I think that childhood is the moat pleasant time.This time ,I used to play outside from morning to evening and didn't have much problem.Most important thing is that there wasn't any dishonesty thing,envy and anxiety.
Otherwise,life is mystety box.It isn't stable or understable .Noone knows what will happen in the future.I wonder what the box has in.So it's more interting than past time.Actually,person can reach the wanted life by trying a lot. I believe myself to achive good things.For example,to finish universty, to have children, get marry and to do good things for society.Thetefore; I prefer to the unknown thing in future time than the happiest time in the past.
Finally, I think about although childhood is happy time of life ,I will see more nice things for my rest time.
