gokuler
Apr 3, 2014
Letters / Motivation Letter for a Masters program, (Photonic networks Engineering) [3]
Dear Sir/ Mam - Ma'am or Madam would be appropriate
I had some financial problems that prevented me from applying earlier but now I'm financially stable.
Ever since I started my undergraduate program, I decided to pursue further academic education in Technology as I know that undergraduate education is not enough these days - In my humble opinion, you need to make a more compelling case.
I was involved in the Telecommunications fields either as a trainee or permanent work like networking and wireless communications... - In this statement the either or clause does not make much grammatical sense. Do you mean to say you were initially a trainee and then became a permanent worker in the telecommunications field ?
In addition to this , thereis a high demand for experts in this field bothfor research and industry.
Besides, having an advanced training like you are offering will definitely help me towards my goal of opening a firm specialized in this field or to continue towards a PHD, as this field is not popular in Egypt.
After a deep search in Masters programs all over the world, I found that Erasmus Mundus program will help me gain both the knowledge and the experience I need, as many of the modules offered are unique and have no equivalent in my home country. The program also gives me the mobility and freedom to choose my path. In addition to aforementioned , the high rating of all the universities participating in the program and the international enterprises associated will give me the right skill sets to step into the exciting domain of telecommunications.
Rest of it is fine (in my opinion). All the best !
Dear Sir/ Mam - Ma'am or Madam would be appropriate
I had some financial problems that prevented me from applying earlier but now I'm financially stable.
Ever since I started my undergraduate program, I decided to pursue further academic education in Technology as I know that undergraduate education is not enough these days - In my humble opinion, you need to make a more compelling case.
I was involved in the Telecommunications fields either as a trainee or permanent work like networking and wireless communications... - In this statement the either or clause does not make much grammatical sense. Do you mean to say you were initially a trainee and then became a permanent worker in the telecommunications field ?
In addition to this , thereis a high demand for experts in this field bothfor research and industry.
Besides, having an advanced training like you are offering will definitely help me towards my goal of opening a firm specialized in this field or to continue towards a PHD, as this field is not popular in Egypt.
After a deep search in Masters programs all over the world, I found that Erasmus Mundus program will help me gain both the knowledge and the experience I need, as many of the modules offered are unique and have no equivalent in my home country. The program also gives me the mobility and freedom to choose my path. In addition to aforementioned , the high rating of all the universities participating in the program and the international enterprises associated will give me the right skill sets to step into the exciting domain of telecommunications.
Rest of it is fine (in my opinion). All the best !