mikoo4444
Apr 8, 2014
Writing Feedback / Be positive when unemployed; People attending schools for many different reasons [3]
all right thank u :)
all right thank u :)
mikoo4444
Apr 8, 2014
Writing Feedback / 'homeless or in jail'; Parents are the best teachers; I agree with the statement [4]
Hi community,
please rate and score my essay for the TOEFL iBT independent writing
i agree with the following statement that parents are the best teachers .
When i was young my father always come to me when I'm watching the tv and he always had something to say but only now when I'm a man i understand that he use to say me don't be closer to the tv you will see after how ur views will decrease and now I'm remember him and by this such things i have done i regret it .
i think that if without my parents now i will be homeless or in jail but by their support and careless now i have a job a wife a child and even a dog feel happy .
i have don a lot of mistakes in my life but always my parents come across this and trying to help me and make me aware of what i did
and always trying to find me solution and make me feel positive and to never give up in this life no matter what is u always learn from this life and never repeat it .
in the other hand life without parents is little bit more hard than have parents cause i think u always have to depend about ur self no one encourage u always have to make a choice alone sometimes a good one sometimes a bad one without awareness of nobody.
Hi community,
please rate and score my essay for the TOEFL iBT independent writing
i agree with the following statement that parents are the best teachers .
When i was young my father always come to me when I'm watching the tv and he always had something to say but only now when I'm a man i understand that he use to say me don't be closer to the tv you will see after how ur views will decrease and now I'm remember him and by this such things i have done i regret it .
i think that if without my parents now i will be homeless or in jail but by their support and careless now i have a job a wife a child and even a dog feel happy .
i have don a lot of mistakes in my life but always my parents come across this and trying to help me and make me aware of what i did
and always trying to find me solution and make me feel positive and to never give up in this life no matter what is u always learn from this life and never repeat it .
in the other hand life without parents is little bit more hard than have parents cause i think u always have to depend about ur self no one encourage u always have to make a choice alone sometimes a good one sometimes a bad one without awareness of nobody.
mikoo4444
Apr 8, 2014
Writing Feedback / Be positive when unemployed; People attending schools for many different reasons [3]
i think people transfer to college or university to pursue their objective in this life.
After high school people choose two different ways of life .There is student who will continue studying and get a degree in the field they would like to be than others who are not interested in school and start to live his way and work small jobs and enjoy they life earlier . The important is that the student who will go to college will have more experience and knowledge and easiest life after guaranty.
Being in a college is to share a beautiful social life with others students even have many girlfriends and friends .Life on compus make enjoy the life buy choosing your own classes and favorite sport that someone would like to share with others student and even participate to tournament with other college or university . Being a student have a lot of benefits in the future especially when someone have good grades.
in the other hand , life without college or university is not that bad but for sure not the same
First no friends from school that will influence u to always do better things and have better wide thinks
Second from the street nobody gonna give u knowledge than studying in college makes u discipline and behave like a professional ,being on time, now how to speak ,give a speech a even better writing skills
the third reason to go college ,is the chance to be an athlete and even participate to tournament is better than taking bad habit from the street like alcohol and cigaret and nowadays even drogss
In my view of conclusion going to college help the child in his future always with a lot of opportunities and even being positive and take it easy on everything can be possible even if there is no jobs .
i think people transfer to college or university to pursue their objective in this life.
After high school people choose two different ways of life .There is student who will continue studying and get a degree in the field they would like to be than others who are not interested in school and start to live his way and work small jobs and enjoy they life earlier . The important is that the student who will go to college will have more experience and knowledge and easiest life after guaranty.
Being in a college is to share a beautiful social life with others students even have many girlfriends and friends .Life on compus make enjoy the life buy choosing your own classes and favorite sport that someone would like to share with others student and even participate to tournament with other college or university . Being a student have a lot of benefits in the future especially when someone have good grades.
in the other hand , life without college or university is not that bad but for sure not the same
First no friends from school that will influence u to always do better things and have better wide thinks
Second from the street nobody gonna give u knowledge than studying in college makes u discipline and behave like a professional ,being on time, now how to speak ,give a speech a even better writing skills
the third reason to go college ,is the chance to be an athlete and even participate to tournament is better than taking bad habit from the street like alcohol and cigaret and nowadays even drogss
In my view of conclusion going to college help the child in his future always with a lot of opportunities and even being positive and take it easy on everything can be possible even if there is no jobs .
