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Apr 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / Cultural Changes in Music from Generation to Generation [3]
Generation consists by a group of people born in the same time, who experienced the same social events and shared the same historical experience, which influence the person's behaviors. Therefore, it means that in all societies are gaps between generations are observed in different relations form, requiring all continuous exercise to deal with differences. In fact, the generations come and go, and each have different genres and styles of music that differentiate them from the previous generations. However, nothing separates the generations more than music. The difference in music makes a barrier separating the generations. Currently generation and previous generation differs in several ways because of genres and styles of music.
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Generation consists by a group of people born in the same time, who experienced the same social events and shared the same historical experience, which influence the person's behaviors. Therefore, it means that in all societies are gaps between generations are observed in different relations form, requiring all continuous exercise to deal with differences. In fact, the generations come and go, and each have different genres and styles of music that differentiate them from the previous generations. However, nothing separates the generations more than music. The difference in music makes a barrier separating the generations. Currently generation and previous generation differs in several ways because of genres and styles of music.
I need to transform this part in bold to make like a purpose hook for one essay, can you help me?
