Dragon9090
May 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / Should the government introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices? [3]
On the one hand, it is reasonable for the government to introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices
For following i would prefer
The clearest advantage of this is ensuring the food eaten by people is always heathy. ==> The clearest advantage of this is to ensure the food eaten by people is always heathy.
leading to enables people to have consistent eating habits. ==> leading toenables people to have consistent eating habits.
guidance in what should to eat ==> guidance in what shouldtobe eaten
On the one hand, it is reasonable for the government to introduce some laws to control nutrition and food choices
For following i would prefer
The clearest advantage of this is ensuring the food eaten by people is always heathy. ==> The clearest advantage of this is to ensure the food eaten by people is always heathy.
leading to enables people to have consistent eating habits. ==> leading to
guidance in what should to eat ==> guidance in what should