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Name: vidhey patel
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jay bajarang   
Aug 30, 2014
Writing Feedback / Ielts 2- Rise in crimes committed by young people in cities [3]

Your over all content is good but your introduction is too short . It just end up in 2 lines, so u must make it upto 5 lines. you have written "The third reason is, due increase ". In place of this it must be "The third reason is, due to increase..." . Anyways ideas are good and i will like to rate it 8.
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