Blizzard
Jun 3, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS - If Police should carry guns or not? [7]
If you use ( 1. topic sentence...2.firstly... 3. example... 4. secondly... 5. finally...) this structure in your second body, it looks better rather than using (on the other hand and to start with)
If you use ( 1. topic sentence...2.firstly... 3. example... 4. secondly... 5. finally...) this structure in your second body, it looks better rather than using (on the other hand and to start with)
