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Posts by parand
Name: Parand Rostami
Joined: Jun 4, 2014
Last Post: Aug 7, 2014
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From: Islamic Republic of Iran
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parand   
Aug 7, 2014
Writing Feedback / Advertising has too much influence on what people buy? [4]

Hence, the effect of advertising on the type of goods which people buy is undeniable => I thought this sentence is the thesis statement, isn't it?

By taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, => I used this sentence to increase the number of vocabs because for TOEFL I need to write more than 300 vocabs. What's your idea? do you have any suggestion?

Thanks for your correction!
parand   
Aug 6, 2014
Writing Feedback / Computer skills reassure the future work-life - is it good to use computers from primary school age? [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to use computer from primary school age on. Give details and examples to support your answer.

In the modern world having knowledge and skill on computer is indispensable. Science is progressing with a great speed, and every part of life and every kinds of job are engaged with computer. Hence, grasping computer skills have got so vital due to having a successful professional life, and computer skills should be both taught and encouraged by teachers. In fact, not only does utilizing and learning this necessity from primary school provide a better future for students, but also it helps their learning process.

The most persuasive point is that by using computer at schools, the students' future can be assured. It means because every job's requirements is knowing computer skills, the chance to be enrolled in a position is stronger for them in the future. It is a fact that learning ability in low age is highly stronger and viable than high age. Teachers should take advantage of this feature of children and encourage them to use computer. Therefore, students can learn this elaborate and wide skill easier and very fast yet unforgettable.

Another reason that deserves some words here is that by the way of computer teacher can be able to use some software and facilities in order to teach their students. Computer provides the ease to accelerate the learning process of students. In the past students have a lot of problems to realize or imagine a fact. Now, however, by computer they can enhance their imagery, imagination, and suggestibility.

In sum, based on all the aforementioned reasons, it is rational to draw the conclusion that utilizing computer at primary schools, both teacher and students have the access to many facilities which make the learning process easier. Moreover, computer skills reassure the future work-life. Even maybe some schools require the teachers and students to have the computer using in their curriculum.
parand   
Aug 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / Advertising has too much influence on what people buy? [4]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Advertising has too much influence on what people buy.
The today's world is the competition era. Regarding this matter, many businesses and companies are investing on the advertising and focusing on customer's absorbing. Hence, the effect of advertising on the type of goods which people buy is undeniable. Not only does advertising help people become acquainted with products, but also it changes the mind of customer.

One of the primary causes is that advertising provides an ambiance in which people can be able to get familiar with a new product. It is obvious that nobody buys the thing which does not know. If one does not know a product exists, how can he feel the need to have it? Advertising is the bridge between company and customer. Being aware of a product, the person thinks about it and consequently feels a need of wanting it. Moreover, even though the person is noticed of a product somehow, observing there is no name of it on advertisement; he cannot trust its validity.

There is another factor that deserves some words here. Advertising has the strong potential to change the people's perspective and beliefs. Many psychologists assert that by the way of advertising can persuade a person to buy a product unlike his willing. They also explain some ways that how to influence such amazing. Both repeating an advertisement and using the popular persons on advertisement are the strategic ways based on psychological reasons. When an audience watches an advertisement over and over, after a while he or she accept that product, although the first visiting time she or he has not had a good intuition toward that goods. All the psychological efforts are the best evidence why advertising is strongly influential.

By taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, it can be deduced that because of paying attention to advertisement; people select their goods. Even using this remarkable effect, governments can enhance the people's culture and decrease the crime between nations by advertising.
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