Undergraduate / "Cheater" - Ethical Dilemma (Caltech Writing Supplement) [3]

"Thank you [my name] but, I'd rather fail myself than to pass cheating."

It was fun to read...your writing is good !

Undergraduate / 'selection of clubs' - Why interested in Georgia Tech? [6]

I believe that it's alright considering that some universities require the applicants to analyze (don't organize) when writing the essays/letters.

Undergraduate / 'selection of clubs' - Why interested in Georgia Tech? [6]

Something is missing in this essay. Please go over the sequence by which you combined the different ideas.

Letters / 'Being a proud Wits Alumni' - MBA application motivation letter [3]

This was a really well read and captivating essay !