FellowWriter
Jun 26, 2014
Writing Feedback / 'I like football and music' - ESSAY on my HOBBIES [5]
Do you like football?, if you like football, what is name team your like? And a player you like, name of player your like. If you don't like football, why? Please, explain.
I think, if I stress, I will sing a karaoke with my friend, in living very much stress, sometimes it make your tired. It will make always tired. Sometime I distraction, because I surfing the Internet, access Facebook and youtube. I interest read electronic newspapers because it very much or rich information, and I don't much money buy paper. I always wake up later, that is reason by last night I go to bed at midnight at 3 a.m, I don't remember an hour exactly, but it is in the range that 3-4h a.m.
Follow you, Are they should go to bed late? you can talk when you go to bed.
Final, I'm pause at here. I promise next topic I will write best.
Good bye and see you again next day.
Do you like football? If you do, what's the name of your favourite team? How about the name of a player you like? If you don't like football, do you care to expain why? If I am stressed out, I sing a karaoke with my friend, who is also very much stressed usually. Sometimes it makes us very tired. Actually, it always does. Sometimes, I distract myself by surfing the internet and going on sites such as Youtube and Facebook. I take great interest in reading online newspapers because it contains as much information as paper ones and I can't afford to buy those. I always wake up late, so I naturally fall asleep late too. For example, last night I went to bed around 3 a.m. I don't remember the exact time, but it was around 3 to 4 a.m. ______________________________ (I couldn't understand this sentence!)
I'll stop here. I promise to write my best on the next topic again.
Good by and see you again next day.
I fixed some errors and improved some sentences. Hope I helped.
Do you like football?, if you like football, what is name team your like? And a player you like, name of player your like. If you don't like football, why? Please, explain.
I think, if I stress, I will sing a karaoke with my friend, in living very much stress, sometimes it make your tired. It will make always tired. Sometime I distraction, because I surfing the Internet, access Facebook and youtube. I interest read electronic newspapers because it very much or rich information, and I don't much money buy paper. I always wake up later, that is reason by last night I go to bed at midnight at 3 a.m, I don't remember an hour exactly, but it is in the range that 3-4h a.m.
Follow you, Are they should go to bed late? you can talk when you go to bed.
Final, I'm pause at here. I promise next topic I will write best.
Good bye and see you again next day.
Do you like football? If you do, what's the name of your favourite team? How about the name of a player you like? If you don't like football, do you care to expain why? If I am stressed out, I sing a karaoke with my friend, who is also very much stressed usually. Sometimes it makes us very tired. Actually, it always does. Sometimes, I distract myself by surfing the internet and going on sites such as Youtube and Facebook. I take great interest in reading online newspapers because it contains as much information as paper ones and I can't afford to buy those. I always wake up late, so I naturally fall asleep late too. For example, last night I went to bed around 3 a.m. I don't remember the exact time, but it was around 3 to 4 a.m. ______________________________ (I couldn't understand this sentence!)
I'll stop here. I promise to write my best on the next topic again.
Good by and see you again next day.
I fixed some errors and improved some sentences. Hope I helped.