Writing Feedback / Payment is very vital factor to consider while choose employer [3]

Topic: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wisely selected job makes happy in life for long run. Opting to right job by considering variety of elements is difficult to individuals. Such as factors like remuneration, stability in job, career development path and safe work environments. While I agree that payment is key concern for job selection, I believe that other elements are considerable.

Payment is very vital factor to consider while choose employer. Money is important for individual to being happy in life. Earning enough, people can fulfill their family's desires for luxury goods, enjoy holidays and purchase own house. Also, they can use the money to provide good education to children. For example, my college is paid $10,000 salary a month, so he had bought nice house and buy good services for family. Getting paid good amount regularly helps people to make long time plan and achieve it without worried.

However, being happy in work environment is depends on other elements, too. People should not have fear of losing job in certain period of time and it interesting to work every day. Stable and career innovating job are make worker more successive in their subject of work. For instance, working more than 10 years in computer engineering, employee got enough knowledge and feels provide themselves. In curtains work field, work safety is also considerable. Such as police man and fire fighter, employee should to ensure, all safety measures taken by employers and his life is out of dangerous.

In summary, every work finder should evaluate all factors before signing job agreement with employers. Considering not for short term instead looking long term future plan and happiness in life. Being happy in job mean being happy in life.

Writing Feedback / What is alternatives to reduce industrial pollution? replace harmful industries [2]

Kindly look below IELTS Task-2 topics and give your suggestions.

Topic:
Some people think the most effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax those companies cause it. What are other alternatives?
Discuss both and give you opinion.

Answer:

Pollution is vital problem worldwide. Developing countries are becoming industrialized that lead to increase polluted environment. In my opinion levying more duty on factories and another course of action, introducing environmental policies and controlling bodies, helps to minimize pollution.

In some countries, government body collect additional tax from companies and builds special industrial zone away from town or residents, to balance business and environment damages. In such a specialized industry area having right channel for draining waste, facilities for destroying emissions and exhaust fumes minimizes environment causes. In New York, east-coast area declared as chemical industry zone, where government has provided tunnel to drain waste water in very deep level of sea. However, sometimes companies' operator feels in-justice to paying additional taxes compare to other companies which are causes nations other way.

In addition, introducing pollution policies and monitoring institutions force company operators to follow it. For example, set limits to produce emissions and exhaust fumes, companies encourage to think for alternative production method in lesser exhaust fumes. Periodically inspection by Monitoring bodies ensures that units have installed adequate emission control equipments. Furthermore, campaigning for economical products and giving more space to green factories, will be a good replacement of polluting industries in future. Green factories aims to manufacture recyclable products and minimum wastes of natural resources.

All societies are equal responsible for increasing pollution. Penalties is somewhat right but not only the solution, are other substitutions considerable to replace harmful industries and make balance between development and environments.