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Posts by tieuzidane
Joined: Jun 10, 2009
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Jul 8, 2009
Writing Feedback / Nowadays people care more about their appearance more than before. Do you agree? [11]

We are living in a modern society in which many people care more about their appearance. There are many boutiques, fashion shops served for young people. It is very good if you have good appearance, in my opinion you should pay enough attention to your appearance because values inside your body are the most important things.

In the past decades, when people just only care about their first and essential demand that is food, nowadays, when people feel satisfied with the first demand, they are looking for the others to make them feel happy and pleased. Someone like shopping, playing football, tennis or going to the gym... these will make people feel more confident and help them work diligently and more effectively.

Moreover, there are a lot of jobs that require perfect appearance, for example: compere, actor and actress, receptionist, marketing assistant... People do these jobs must have perfect appearance because they communicate much with others and often appear on TV or other kinds of media.

Although your abilities and your skills are the key to succeed, but appearance play a very important role in your life. If you have a good appearance, you easily communicate with others and that makes your work more influent. In a job interview or meeting with a customer, first impression is very grand, even it would be everything. The interviewee will judge you through your appearance first or if you are staff of a company you will be your company's representative talking with client.

Nowadays, some people concentrate too much on their appearance, that is not necessary, even just a waste of time. You do not have to wear like a superstar while you just normally do a job not like a star. Most importantly, you must learn how to get dressed and behave in each situation in your life.
tieuzidane   
Jun 16, 2009
Letters / complaint letter to landlord about the new hired house [4]

My name is Ducanh who has been hired your house one week before. Before entering the new house, I was very satisfied with the facilities inside, but some of them broke just after 2 days since I moved into the house. Therefore, I am writing a let you know about the state of the house and ask you something what I can do.

As you know, on July 1st 2009, I moved into your house, I think it is a lovely house with bright paint and quite good furniture. But two days later, when I waked up and went to the lavatory brushing teeth and taking a bath. I was very amazed that the room was flooded although I did not leave any rubbish in its tube, so there is one remaining toilet that can be used, it is inconvenient for my kids and my wife because we are all very busy in the morning. Moreover, water source is not too clean as you promised before. The problems not only come from toilet but also from cook and the wall. Chimney of the cook seemed to be stuck; whenever we cook more than two dishes, there is always a lot of smoke in the house. The paint set apart and scattered over the ground.

The problems have happened for nearly one week, and I suppose I cannot stand the current state any more. I hope to receive your response as soon as possible and we can discuss these matters and find appropriate solutions.
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