Writing Feedback / Choosing between public transportation or electric car, reduce the emissions of CO2 [5]

Hi tphy,

I am sorry, your text don't have space before commas or full stop.

Undergraduate / '40 question paper' - describe an incident which led you to challenge yourself [8]

Thank you very much for you time and efforts.
I am sorry for about the clutter and a lot of grammatical errors in the statement. I will practice regularly and hope to minimize this issue in my next statements. Your comments are invaluable for me as a beginner, I liked.

Undergraduate / '40 question paper' - describe an incident which led you to challenge yourself [8]

Thanks for your advise, the errors are stroke, now my 2nd draft would be this

I have always been smart, always good enough without trying, I went to nearby library in my town, there iswas a pile of quiz books alphabetically arranged on the shelf. It iswas neatly and tidily managed. There were some interesting quiz books that attract me to try my best in writing abilities and general knowledge. It comes along with answered key on the last page of book. After trying a 40 question paper, I found that just half of my answers were correct and the rest were wrong. Embarrassed me.! This incident inspired me to take an academic course.

Your commend and advise are really helpful.

Undergraduate / '40 question paper' - describe an incident which led you to challenge yourself [8]

Thanks for your reply. This is the best way to help me develop new ideas
This is a 70-100 words essay for addmision to Uopeople. I would describe it as Bad Writing Skill, and as a consequence of being smart, always good enough without trying.

Because words limit is 100, so I will be too much to fit in with others ideas.