Adamtong
Sep 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / What should kids do when parents are too busy to accompany their child? TOEFL EXAM [8]
If parents are too busy to accompany their kids, do you think the kids should spend more time playing games or sports or they should do more related to schoolwork?
It is significant to discuss about the controversy on the issue that what should kids do when parents are too busy to accompany their kids.A fair proportion of people asserts that the kids should spend more time playing games or sports,other people,nevertheless,advocate that kids should do more related to schoolwork.As far as i am concerned,i sided with latter,for it is more advisable.Of the countless reasons that strengthen my viewpoint,i will provide the most concrete reasons and evidences as follows.
The first point i'm presenting is that as a student,it is our responsibility to study,to review the facts of science we learnt.In my daily study,i strongly have a feeling that we can not obtain every information from the class no matter how hard we try and even if we understand almost everything from the professor,which i deeply doubt that,we would forget the keys of the lecture after a period of time.And this make reviewing the schoolwork very critical to a student. And considering that our parents pay the fee to let us get a good education,it is reasonable we spend the leisure time to review the knowledge we acquire.
Another reason why i would like to vote for spending more time to do schoolwork is that leisure time is a good time slot to challenge what we have learnt.For me,the purpose of the education is to perfect ourselves.And the only way to perfect ourselves is to challenge ourselves.We study a lot of facts from the class,but is that correct?What can we learn from that piece of the history,or if that piece of history is a lie at all?How can we use that equation more smartly?This question can never be taught by a teacher or our parents hand by hand.The process to search the answer to this question is the process to challenge ourselves and to perfect ourselves.
Admittedly, i agree that playing games or sports makes fun to the kids to compensate the loneliness from the absence of the parents and even build up our body,making us much healthier.However,we have to realize that spending hours and hours of the precious time running and laughing is a kind of wasting time compared to meditation about the philosophy of the social or physical science.
Taking into account all these factors listed above,we can easily draw the conclusion that it is wiser to spend more time doing some more related to schoolwork.
If parents are too busy to accompany their kids, do you think the kids should spend more time playing games or sports or they should do more related to schoolwork?
It is significant to discuss about the controversy on the issue that what should kids do when parents are too busy to accompany their kids.A fair proportion of people asserts that the kids should spend more time playing games or sports,other people,nevertheless,advocate that kids should do more related to schoolwork.As far as i am concerned,i sided with latter,for it is more advisable.Of the countless reasons that strengthen my viewpoint,i will provide the most concrete reasons and evidences as follows.
The first point i'm presenting is that as a student,it is our responsibility to study,to review the facts of science we learnt.In my daily study,i strongly have a feeling that we can not obtain every information from the class no matter how hard we try and even if we understand almost everything from the professor,which i deeply doubt that,we would forget the keys of the lecture after a period of time.And this make reviewing the schoolwork very critical to a student. And considering that our parents pay the fee to let us get a good education,it is reasonable we spend the leisure time to review the knowledge we acquire.
Another reason why i would like to vote for spending more time to do schoolwork is that leisure time is a good time slot to challenge what we have learnt.For me,the purpose of the education is to perfect ourselves.And the only way to perfect ourselves is to challenge ourselves.We study a lot of facts from the class,but is that correct?What can we learn from that piece of the history,or if that piece of history is a lie at all?How can we use that equation more smartly?This question can never be taught by a teacher or our parents hand by hand.The process to search the answer to this question is the process to challenge ourselves and to perfect ourselves.
Admittedly, i agree that playing games or sports makes fun to the kids to compensate the loneliness from the absence of the parents and even build up our body,making us much healthier.However,we have to realize that spending hours and hours of the precious time running and laughing is a kind of wasting time compared to meditation about the philosophy of the social or physical science.
Taking into account all these factors listed above,we can easily draw the conclusion that it is wiser to spend more time doing some more related to schoolwork.
