Adamtong
Oct 3, 2014
Writing Feedback / Response to an article "Struggle for perfection" [3]
Perfection is always a good word in my dictionary. However this passage provide me a totally different view and really persuades me. This is a great essay,and congratulations.
The most impressive part of this essay is about the argument about domestic abuse. This really happens in my daily life. From girls to my mom, they always doubt if they are fat and diet occasionally. This reflects the philosophy nowadays.
Perfection is always a good word in my dictionary. However this passage provide me a totally different view and really persuades me. This is a great essay,and congratulations.
Media has set a bar for women. Each woman will be judged on these standards. Society is profoundly influenced by media who portrays that every woman must look like a supermodel. If she fails to fit in the society's description of a beautiful woman, she won't be considered pretty, even if her character is good. Women try their best to attain the aesthetics of a model. During this pursuit they develop eating disorders due to high stress and damage their figure miserably; looking even more horrible than before.
The most impressive part of this essay is about the argument about domestic abuse. This really happens in my daily life. From girls to my mom, they always doubt if they are fat and diet occasionally. This reflects the philosophy nowadays.
