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Name: hon
Joined: Sep 15, 2014
Last Post: Sep 16, 2014
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Sep 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Tell UoPeople a little bit about your village, city, region or country and what makes it unique. [5]

Thanks for your guidance, your time and efforts. This is the second draft, please help whether any unnecessary point to cut or any description to make it shorter as the words count is over the limitation allowed

Batam island is a popular tourist destination in my country --Indonesia.

The local people always show great hospitality on guests' arrival with a friendly smile and warm welcome by saying: Selamat-datang, while on departure: Terima-kasih, Selamat-tinggal, Sampai-ketemu will be used. Mean: Thank you for visit, well-leaving, and see you again, followed by pleasant smile makes people comfortable.

Even though it is small island, there are many interesting places to visit, such as: Ocarina Beach, Tanjung-Pingir Beach, and Barelang Beach. Swimming on these beaches is safe. Accommodation is very convenient. Nice scenery and Panorama-view of Singapore from this island is great. Also live seafood and fresh fruits is in affordable price.

These features make my city a famous place for visitors to enjoy. (122 words)
hor   
Sep 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Tell UoPeople a little bit about your village, city, region or country and what makes it unique. [5]

Hello, this is a 70-100 words statement. Can someone give me comments on the content, and my grammar issues. If possible is there other perspectives best suit this essay --Thanks

Batam island is a popular tourist destination in my country --Indonesia. Eventhough this island is very small, there are many interesting places for visitors to visit, such as; Ocarina Beach, Tanjung Pingir Beach, and Barelang Beach. Swimming on these beaches are safe. Another fascinating feature is the live seafood and local fresh fruits, at fair prices from local stores and restaurants. Accomodations are also very convenient, several hotels provide nice sceenary and panorama view of neighbor country -- Singapore. These remarkable features make my city a famouse place for people who come here. (92 words).
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