Undergraduate / The smallest infection or malignancy can be catastrophic and debilitating for a person; Career Goals [4]

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The smallest infection or malignancy can be catastrophic and debilitating for a person emotionally and financially. Yet, doctors provide the one thing that each patient desires through the pain and unanswered questions - hope. Volunteering at my local hospital has allowed me to see the need for doctors who exhibit compassion and impart comfort but are relentless in the fight to offer hope.