Writing Feedback / "Hey my son Military writ came for you" - should national service be mandatory for young adults? [4]

Do you agree or disagree that the government should require all young adults to perform some kind of national service, such as military service and social work

Your mom, one day, said loudly " Hey my son Military writ is came for you" Then Some young men think that it is my duty, for another one who say to himself whether the government necessary require it? while, if were they, I strongly will agree that the government should require young adults to perform some kind of national work, specially military service, for following below reasons.

Military service can provide physical improvement. All of young adults except already have fulfill the military service, have a weak physical. Because they are just 17 or 18 at this time. For example; before my brother go to military service, we used to wrestle everyday and I always won. However, after he arrived, I can't win him.

Moreover, Military service is give chance that young adults discover themselves. By this time that military, they need to recognize themselves. Most young adults begin interesting everything that they don't know at this time. So, They seduction into the bad habits sometimes, such as alcohol, marijuana, and drug and others. That is why Military service need to them and give chance.

Finally, one of the most important reason that I agree, Military service teach how can I real man and independence adult. What is it mean? All high school never teach about be brave, durability and doggedness in life.

In conclusion, I feel that Military service need to all young adults and government should require all young adults to perform military service. Consequently, Military Service which is can help you to learn new experience, new lifestyle and it is become beginning your new world.

Writing Feedback / If I had one hour to visit a famous person, I would say that person will be Genghis Khan [2]

this topic is Q1 type of speaking section of TOEFL iBT.i must practicing 15 sec and speaking 45 sec.This is my answer I hope you are check it out for me.

if i had one hour to visit a famous person,i would say that person will be Genghis Khan for 2 reasons

first, i am so proud of him and i thought that i wanna become a like him.Because when i was child,all people-i know the best-have been talking about him then i asked from them "Who is Genghis Khan?" they respond me He is our hero and forefather.He have a special genius of leadership and so intellegence

second,his strategy of military was one of the most great strategy and so famous for all around of the world.This strategy had helped for him to conquer their enemies.

therefore,i would talk about his strategy and i would like to visit for Genghis Khan

Writing Feedback / Have you ever wondered what that "Organically grown" sticker actually means when you have seen signs [3]

today,i read some interesting passage on internet.This passage's title is Have you ever wondered what that "Organically grown" sticker actually means ? Then,i am writing that what i understood from this passage.i hope that you are check it that organization of below sentences

Well,Organically grown is bugs,i know it sound Ghostly,because Predatory insects have been used in agriculture for at least 1700 years.They-Chinese who used this way first-used yellow ants to control caterpillers and other pests in their own agriculture.this way is disappeared for short time because of the some reason (this is my mind)

but today,all of the people are requiring Organic vegetables and products.so the farmers have brought the bugs back to meet demand of people and control their pants and vegetables instead the chemical pesticide.

Finally,if the farmers would use predatory insects-such as yellow citrus ants,ladybugs and a lacewing larva etc...-to protect their own farms from some troublesome insect instead chemical pesticide.Their products are Organically grown product