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Oct 10, 2014
Undergraduate / Service Academy Nomination Essay: What do you envision as your ultimate role with the US military? [4]

mportance of having a medically trained professional officer on the battlefield

Thank you!! so this answers the question better? im not sure what more i can add to make a second paragraph

My future goal is to major in a medical field profession. By implicating the skills learned from my medical training, I will provide aid and assistance to soldiers and to their families. Studying at a service academy will enable me to not only become military general but also enable me to comprehend the struggles that injured individuals go through, verses attending a civilian medical school. By understanding the background knowledge of the military life, I will able to treat patients more effectively as well as empathize with their pain.

The importance of having a medically trained professional officer on the battlefield is crucially essential for the military as a whole. My addition to medical branch could possibly change the way America heals its wounded on the front-line and helps the injured recover at the military hospital. This is the vision that I want to share with the military and should strive to bring to a reality by graduating from the military academy.
america888   
Oct 10, 2014
Undergraduate / Service Academy Nomination Essay: What do you envision as your ultimate role with the US military? [4]

i got locked out of my other account.

please look for ways for me to revise my essay and if I'm answering the prompt correctly. Thank you!!


Prompt: What do you envision as your ultimate role with the US military?

My desire to attend a military academy is for the sole purpose to serve my country and have a military career. If I would be blessed with the opportunity to attend an academy, I will strive to be a superlative leader for the future of woman and Hispanics in the profession of arms. Having a career the armed forces as a military officer is not for the ordinary person. It is a special calling and a lifetime decision being made which is why I am adamantly sure this is the only occupation for me.

My future goal is to major in a medical field profession. By implicating the skills learned from my medical training, I will provide aid and assistance to soldiers and to their families. Studying at a service academy will enable me to not only become military general but also enable me to comprehend the struggles that injured individuals go through, verses attending a civilian medical school. By understanding the background knowledge of the military life, I will able to treat patients more effectively as well as empathize with their pain.

I am certain that a career as a United States officer fits my unique combination of strengths better than any number civilian careers could.
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