maiquynhbui
Dec 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / ESSAY: RELATED TO COMPUTERS vs EDUCATION [4]
Hi. I hv some comments about ur essay
First, I think u should use the word better instead of best in the sentence "In my opinion, the latter is the best choice..." u can write : " In my opinion, the latter may be a better choice.." Cuz it's just ur opinion, so u should use hedging word in the statement that the info or idea is not 100% certain.
Second, I think the idea is not clear.
Just my opinion. I hope my comments r helpful for u. :)
Hi. I hv some comments about ur essay
First, I think u should use the word better instead of best in the sentence "In my opinion, the latter is the best choice..." u can write : " In my opinion, the latter may be a better choice.." Cuz it's just ur opinion, so u should use hedging word in the statement that the info or idea is not 100% certain.
Second, I think the idea is not clear.
Just my opinion. I hope my comments r helpful for u. :)
