Writing Feedback / IELTS: Four countries comparison - Japan spending for food was highest with approximately 23% [3]

The graph illustrates four different countries spend money for five things, included food, housing, transportation, health care and clothing in 2009.

Overall, shares of expenditures for housing was the highest in the most of these countries excepted Japan, however, they were over 20%. It can be obviously, total percentage of transportation and food were the second biggest and higher than 10%. By contrast with health care and clothing spending just under 10%.

According to te chart, review top of percentage of each outlay we can see that the United states had shares of expenditures for housing and health care was biggest with around 27% and 7%, respectively. Whereas Japan had spending of shares for food was highest withh approximately 23%. Similary, Canada had outlay for transportation was biggest compared with United states, United Kingdom and Japan with 20%

In contrast, the United states had proportion of food spending and clothing outlay were the lowest in four countries with just under 15% and 4%, respectively. While Japanes spend money for transportation was lowest with 10%, the canada had shares of expenditures of housing was lowest and the United Kingdom just spend about 1% for health care at least in four countries.

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