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Esun   
Jun 23, 2009
Letters / Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe [10]

Hello Everyone,

Thank you All so much for your support.

I have made some changes to the Recom Letter, including a couple of examples and also making it more clear so it addresses the university.

I would be most grateful again, if someone could look into this and review the grammar.

Thank you
Esun
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TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN,

I am writing to you in support of Mr. Esun and his desire to attend Edinburgh University for the BEng Program in Mechanical Engineering.

I have known him for a year during which his performance working as a Graduate Mechanical Engineer for XYZ (U.K.) has proved that he is very enthusiastic and a potential to become a great engineer.

His efficiency in planning projects, and meeting deadlines specifically were proved to me by accomplishing many projects, the two examples are as follows:

1. Successfully Lead the Graduate team in producing a preliminary Acid Gas Removal Report.

2. Successfully updating the Rhum's field economic model (in assistant with the company's commercial analyst) well within the time limit.

I enthusiastically recommend Mr. Esun as an applicant to Edinburgh University and appreciate your facilitation in accepting his admission to your university.

Please do not hesitate to contact me, if you require any further information.
Yours faithfully,
Esun   
Jun 22, 2009
Letters / Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe [10]

to be honest im trying to get my boss sign this letter , but didnt know what to put in it. Is that a formal Reccom Letter ? or is it just too much ?

I would apreciate it , if you could edit this so it looks more realistic.
Esun   
Jun 22, 2009
Letters / Graduate Mechanical Engineer; Recommendation Letter for John Doe [10]

Would be very grateful if anyone could check this Recommendation Letter and improve its context.
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Date: 10 June 2009
Ref: A/1119-09

Recommendation Letter for John Doe

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN,
It is with great pleasure that I recommend John Doe. I have known him for a year during which his performance working as a Graduate Mechanical Engineer for XYZ Ltd proved that he will be a valuable addition to any company.

John distinguished himself by being enthusiastic, dedicated employee with reliable work habits. He is capable of working under minimum supervision and willingly accepts it when offered. During this period he has proved himself as an efficient employee, who is punctual in planning; meeting deadlines, and conscientiously adheres to company standards and guidelines.

Please do not hesitate to contact us, if you require any further information.

Yours faithfully,

H E,
Executive Director
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