Research Papers / Canadian education - My aim in study [8]

plz help me to re write

Research Papers / Canadian education - My aim in study [8]

i will try but no pint come in my head.
r u help me to re-write it?
plz correction my plan
plz
next week i'll submit all of my doc in Canadian embassy
i'll wait for ur response

Research Papers / Canadian education - My aim in study [8]

this is my assignment, plz check it

I am Asaduzzaman, graduated Bangladeshi citizen. I have been admitted to the professional program in Fire Protection Engineering Technology (FPT) at Seneca Collage in Toronto. I would like to have resident permit in Canada for the duration of my program.

Canada is regarded to be one the countries for providing globally recognized high quality education. Canada, a polyglot country, which is a platform to give me the opportunity to get exposure to enriched cultural diversity. From compare to other countries, Canadian educational institutes have excellent facilities and faculties and the campus lifestyle is a great attraction for as well. I have chosen Fire Protection Engineering Technology (FPT) as my professional course in Seneca Collage. Seneca's FPT program is one of the leading North American programs for fire protection engineering.

From an early age, I was dreamed about to be an engineer, keep this in mind, I have completed my graduation in Electrical and Electronics Engineering (EEE) from United International University (UIU). In addition, I now intend to study overseas, which I have been dreaming for a very long time. I want to go highest position in my professional career. Nevertheless, in my social-economic system (condition), it is also difficult to move further in the profession sector without any profession or international level or form. For which I would need an internationally recognize professional degree. Whatever, I have chosen Fire Protection Engineering Technology (FPT) as my profession program, which is very valuable of our country. Moreover, I am intending to use my potentials to compete with international students and thus want to avail the chance to sharpen my skills and abilities to compete in the international arena. Moreover, I want to bring Canadian technology and educational knowledge to secure from insecure fire and to progress my country.

Professional engineering program in Bangladesh is my first choice, but there are not too many educational institutes, which offer this course, which I want to study. Only few Universities have included the course in their study programs. However, this program is being offered in my country as well, but there is surely difference in the standards of education and infrastructure there. Therefore, pursuing a similar degree in my country of residence at the present time might create an obstacle to my future career. In addition, I want to study in a class with diverse population and learn a new culture. Cultural awareness surely helps differentiate people within a workforce.

Bangladesh is now developing quite fast in the industrial sector. Due to the growth of industrialization, my country needs more engineers with up to date industrial and technological knowledge. Through this program, I can be able to achieve knowledge of fire alarming configure, fire protection software, alarming coding, in addition to training in advanced design and hand on practice designed by industry. There are many manufacturers and factories; even residential building burns out in every instant. Therefore, international degree on the base of fire protection gives me the best opportunity to get high status job facility. In addition, by completing this program, I enhance my academic background and place myself in a secure job in my country.

I am a Bangladeshi citizen by born. I have been raised up in my country. The scent of my country is combined with my vain. I hold solid family and friendship ties here. All of my allies and family member love me a great deal. Though I have an older sis who is married and lives with husband, but I am the elder son of my parents, and bear a younger brother who is a scholar. Therefore, It's my duty to take guardianship of them. Besides that, there is some business of my father those needed to be taken charge of. In addition, this country gives me more, the time has come to return it back and I want to serve my country as a successful man.