NickT
Jun 24, 2009
Undergraduate / "How will this program help me accomplish my academic goals? [6]
This is my final draft for the essay if i could please get some feedback before i turn it in.
"How will this program help me accomplish my academic goals?" (300 words)
Essay
Throughout my life I have been given vast amounts of opportunities. I have been fortunate enough to learn under some of the best teachers at one of the most rigorous academic institutes in dc metropolitan area. However, on the eve my senior year of high school I have yet to fulfill the potential that has been predestined for me. I have consistently been "just good enough," living a life of mediocrity with brief glimpses of my ability. The path that I outlined for myself was becoming nothing more than a distant memory of what could have been. I now realize that these experiences have only contributed to the person that I am today.
Im a young man searching for an opportunity to change, an opportunity to prove myself amongst the best and brightest in one of the most paramount of academic environments. I will be able to (...) READ ABOVE
This is my final draft for the essay if i could please get some feedback before i turn it in.
"How will this program help me accomplish my academic goals?" (300 words)
Essay
Throughout my life I have been given vast amounts of opportunities. I have been fortunate enough to learn under some of the best teachers at one of the most rigorous academic institutes in dc metropolitan area. However, on the eve my senior year of high school I have yet to fulfill the potential that has been predestined for me. I have consistently been "just good enough," living a life of mediocrity with brief glimpses of my ability. The path that I outlined for myself was becoming nothing more than a distant memory of what could have been. I now realize that these experiences have only contributed to the person that I am today.
Im a young man searching for an opportunity to change, an opportunity to prove myself amongst the best and brightest in one of the most paramount of academic environments. I will be able to (...) READ ABOVE