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Name: Remi Mejo
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Oct 27, 2014
Undergraduate / MIT Essay - Three Notebooks - modes buttons [3]

I agree that it might be best to focus on one attribute as requested by the prompt. This would allow you to develop the essay further given the 250 limitation and develop a better flow. As it is now, it doesn't fully respond to the prompt and intruding to touch upon the topics seems rushed at the end. I would expand upon your imagination as you attribute and how it manifests itself in your notebooks. Very creative. Good luck!
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