Graduate / As a child I loved to tear things apart - International Dental Program SOP [8]

Hello. Just here trying my best on this Statement of Purpose for Dental School (International Dental Program). So far I have an introduction. I am curious. Does this intrigue you to read more??? Corrections and feedback are very welcomed.

As a child I loved to tear things apart. The fun part was putting it back together. This required meticulous attention to detail and fine motor control. The desire to understand and repair continued throughout my life. It was in high school, during a mission trip to a rural part of Jalisco, Mexico, that I realized the greatness of Dentistry. Not only did it require discipline and a steady hand like an art form, it improved the quality of lives. I watched as a dentist drilled apart a tooth in order to removed decayed portions. Then he filled the cavity, applied a laser light and it was as if the cavity was never there. Essentially, he took it apart and put it back together. I was amazed. It was at this moment that I realized I wanted to become a dentist. The art of dentistry requires doctors that have a love for detailed work and a passion for working with their hands. My continuous thirst for self-improvement, unique background, and my desire to help others make me a perfect fit for your program.