Scholarship / Eligibility, financial need background, community involvement - Scholarship Essay; Graphic Designer [10]

The instructions on this essay was to be consice explaining your eligibility, financial need background and leadership and community involvement. Also, to explain how my current job and it's relationship to future plans.No more than one page. I put a * on sensitive information for security. I would really apprechiate your feedback, specially on grammar errors!

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My Goal was to be a Graphic Designer. In Puerto Rico, Graphic Design is not offered as a bachelor's degree but as a course, and it was not equipped with the necessary technology. My family couldn't afford to pay for my studies so I was depending on the Pell Grant to earn my degree. I was not conformed with the options I had in my home country, therefore, I decided to set my goals in the United States. I had done my research and decided where I wanted to study although, in spite of all my plans and effort to pay for tuition, including scholarships and loans, I was still not capable of affording it. My husband(boyfriend at the time), was starting his bachelor's in Electric Engineering when he offered a future with him. He said if he could find a job that could sustain us both, and I would be able to study, would I marry him. I said yes, he joined the *** and we moved to ***. Graphic Design is not offered here, but I enrolled in Communication studies, which prepares me for many jobs of my interest, for example, Teaching and Journalism. My goals as Graphic Designer are still in mind, I intend to pursue this career as a master's degree when we move to the states.

I should be considered for this scholarship because although the *** provides benefits like the Spouse Tuition Assistant, Is still not enough to pay for my degree. I am a responsible, hardworking person with leadership skills. My volunteer experience as a teacher's aid, shows I'm really dedicated and efficient in what I do, as well in my job at La Gurdia English school, teaching English to ***. This scholarship will help me pursue my current goal, move on to the next, and be a successful as a professional.