Posts by Charlie221133

Charlie221133

Jun 30, 2009

Undergraduate / The direction I want to take my education; UWashington Bothell - PS/software systems [8]

University of Washington Bothell - Personal Statement (Attempt #2)

I have to submit this personal statement tomarrow morning. I was hoping someone would double check it for me. I have changed the things that you guys recommended, and I have expanded in some places. thank you.

Charlie221133

Jun 30, 2009

Undergraduate / "I want to attend Chapel" - provide advice on how I can better my essay. [5]

Interesting read. Try to cut down on the double statements, 'unsafe and unstable' . They're unnecessary, and they slow down the pace. So do adverbs like 'wonderfully'.

Charlie221133

Jun 28, 2009

Undergraduate / The direction I want to take my education; UWashington Bothell - PS/software systems [8]

Thank you, i appreciate the help.

Charlie221133

Jun 27, 2009

Undergraduate / The direction I want to take my education; UWashington Bothell - PS/software systems [8]

I'm transfering to the University of washington Bothell, intending to go into their Software Systems program. The max word count is 1000 words, so far I'm at 426. I figure less is more considering how many of these they have to read. Am i right? Any feedback/advise/criticism or approval is welcome. Thx

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