Scholarship / Smiles Foundation: no link, no snide remarks, no side talks, no laughter, no gossip against You [10]

Hello please is an essay am writing for a scholarship. Please is this a good essay? If not help me correct it.
Question: ESSAY: Describe the community service and leadership experiences you bring to ASU and how you will contribute to ASU's community if you were accepted into The MasterCard Foundation Scholars Program.

(minimum of 250 words, maximum of 750 words

Essay

Smiles Foundation is an anonymous friends group, to help people take out their hearts burden to discuss very intimate issues with us and ensure you remain anonymous: no link, no snide remarks, no side talks, no laughter, no gossip against You. We proffer solution to any issue that tries to take the Smile off any of our friends face. The journey of smiles started precisely in April 1983: Smiles is the outcome of a research that has been on since then.

It is a network set to bring to the fore all those nagging issues and fears which we all want to ignore and push under the carpet. Smiles encourages people to discuss them, so it can be resolved if possible once and forever. Smiles has being set up to create happiness for everyone that comes across Her way, bring joy, create good health, fun and laughter, develop happy groups who want peace of mind, unburden, a shoulder to cry on, meet and deliberate on workable solutions. Our friends are anyone who deserves a good and healthy life: women & men (married, separated, widowed, divorced, singles), Youth and even teenagers; especially adolescents and children in schools who are molested, abused and raped daily.

A leader is defined as someone who commands a group of people. In truth, however, a leader is much more than that. In my opinion, a leader is someone who has a vision and the passion to make it come to life. A leader is committed, determined, motivated, and good at working with others. I believe that all of these qualities define my personality when I set a goal. I have had a number of leadership experiences, but I like to share most recent one. I demonstrated leadership by setting a goal and accomplishing it. One-day in Trendz Technologies, The Head of IT had a terrible accident and couldn't come to day that day and I was the only person at the moment to replace him temporarily. The CEO called me to his office the next day and told me they just got a contract to install Microsoft Windows 7 operating system on Ninety - eight (98) Computers in two (2) days at a Customer care call center. Now when the company get a job like this, they usually employ more people and pay them for the installation $20 for each installation that is more than halve the money collected for the entire contract. So we went there. When we got there, I saw that all the computer were on same network and connected to central server. I remember Remote OS Installation I came across it sometime ego while I was reading about Windows Deployment. I said to him we don't need all this guys to do the installation manually, We can do it automatically, fast, install the OS on each computer at the same time and save time and money. He was amazed and said he had no idea it can be done like that. He said OK that he was going to give me a shot and if I couldn't do it he will fire me. I knew it was possible but I hadn't done it before. So that night do a lot of research about it, I would watch videos on how to it and about it online both on Microsoft website and other tech site. I also read about other ways and solutions to do it rather than Microsoft own instructions. I didn't sleep that night. After the research, I decided to try it on three (3) computers and it worked I was very happy. We had to fully complete the task by also installing the software the client will needed on their computer to do their job. So I did Windows Deployment (Unattended Installation) and added the applications necessary. (E.g Microsoft office, VoIP software e.t.c ) the installation image. As the new head of IT I had to show a good leadership example, creative thinking, commitment and solution provider.