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An important movie.

1.breafly describe a movie which had a strong influence on you. it may have isnpired you, cheere you up, or helped you in some other way, but it should have done more than entertain you.

2. Explain how your viewing of this movie helped you understand and face a conflict in your life. It can be an emotional, spiritual, physical, or mental problem or situation.

And here is my essay:

I have watched many movies, but the movie I like the most is Lost in Translation. This movie have taught me what to do to overcome my situation as an immigrant who just moved to America from China.

This movie is about Charlotte who is the young wife of a photographer on assignment to Tokyo. In Tokyo, her husband leaves her alone in a hotel to pursue his own journey. She meets Harris who stays in the same hotel. They strike up a friendship. The two go through their adventure in Tokyo together experiencing the different between Japanese and American culture. They feel the loneliness, alienation and ennui when they have to operate within a different cultural and social Japanese environment. Especially, without knowing the Japanese language, it is really difficult for them to understand Japanese people around them.

I have been in America for a few years,and I have experienced many difficulties in this new culture. The movie makes me realize that living in any environment, without understand a language of its own will prevent us from many opportunities. I remember the first few month when I just came here, I I felt so lonely, bored, and frustrated because being unable to talk to people in English. Some people who spoke English called me on my cell phone, I could not understand what they meant who they were, so I always hung up on them and I felt so embarrassed.

Then I tried to work very hard and went to school to learn English so that I could not have time to feel sad or lonely. My English have been improving a lot comparing to it was before, I feel more confident and comfortable now living in America because I can communicate with people around me who don't speak the same my language.

Even though, it is still difficult for me in communication, I never stop learning English since it is not my native language. I even go further in attending college to improve my knowledge in understanding American culture and pursuing an educational career. I love to talk to my teacher and my classmates so that I can practice my English better and through them I can learn a lot of new things about American culture.

The movie Lost In Translation informs me that It is important that living in a culture we need to know the language in order to participate in that culture. As an immigrant student living in America, I will try my best to learn English to facilitate my communication ability.