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Jan 3, 2015
Graduate / "Do it carefully and well as your work will be kept so long"; Moment that the accounting touched me [4]
I have revised as you say and made some changes. I am going to graduate this year so for now i have only done several internships. I am afraid this one is too dull.I will appreciate all the suggestions, thanks again!
Here is the revised vision:
My past education background and working experience accorded closely with my career objectives. Throughout the undergraduate years, various accounting courses have provided me with a comprehensive understanding of the fundamental financial theories as well as the business world in general. Gradually I have developed the ability to carry out in-depth academic knowledge based on my passing 10 exams of ACCA. In addition to ordinary studying, I devoted a good portion of time to taking internships in multiple accounting and financial institutions during my summer and winter holidays, including an accounting firm and Standard Charted Bank. These experiences have given me a great chance to utilize financial theories I learnt in school and put them into practice, and meanwhile I also establish a certain career objective.
With regard to my short-term goal, the first one is right at the corner, which is to successfully get into your preeminent Accounting program at the LeBow College, and then to pass CPA exam within two years. After my graduate, I intend to find a position as a professional auditor or business consultant in Big4 or consulting company to accumulate my working experience with my in-depth knowledge in accounting area during three to five years. From then on, I will give myself another 5 years to take on a senior management role within the company. In addition, my long term goal is to move me slowly into a CFO role by becoming a principal contributor to the company's success.
Driven by this well-designed career path of mine, I was attracted to your comprehensive curriculum for Master of Science in accounting program in LeBow College, which is built around a careful balance of business, general education, and accounting courses. Moreover, the abundant internship opportunities in Philadelphia would be an ideal way to sharpen my academic skills. Specifically, the program not only teaches advanced accounting knowledge, but also integrates that of business administration, which interests me substantially. Accounting is not merely about recording, but to find the best way to track the business operation, reflect financial condition and operation accomplishments. Successful accountants are able to balance the interests of the shareholder, creditors and managers well, and help maximize the enterprise's profit. Thus, for my graduate studies, I want to learn how to use financial information to analyze the operation conditions to provide feasible suggestion for the development of the enterprise.
So driven by my desire to achieve my objects and the unique program of Lebow College, I chose to attend Lebow, I sincerely thank you for your consideration, and I hope you find my confidence, ability and passion to be commensurate with the requirements and expectation of the program.
I have revised as you say and made some changes. I am going to graduate this year so for now i have only done several internships. I am afraid this one is too dull.I will appreciate all the suggestions, thanks again!
Here is the revised vision:
My past education background and working experience accorded closely with my career objectives. Throughout the undergraduate years, various accounting courses have provided me with a comprehensive understanding of the fundamental financial theories as well as the business world in general. Gradually I have developed the ability to carry out in-depth academic knowledge based on my passing 10 exams of ACCA. In addition to ordinary studying, I devoted a good portion of time to taking internships in multiple accounting and financial institutions during my summer and winter holidays, including an accounting firm and Standard Charted Bank. These experiences have given me a great chance to utilize financial theories I learnt in school and put them into practice, and meanwhile I also establish a certain career objective.
With regard to my short-term goal, the first one is right at the corner, which is to successfully get into your preeminent Accounting program at the LeBow College, and then to pass CPA exam within two years. After my graduate, I intend to find a position as a professional auditor or business consultant in Big4 or consulting company to accumulate my working experience with my in-depth knowledge in accounting area during three to five years. From then on, I will give myself another 5 years to take on a senior management role within the company. In addition, my long term goal is to move me slowly into a CFO role by becoming a principal contributor to the company's success.
Driven by this well-designed career path of mine, I was attracted to your comprehensive curriculum for Master of Science in accounting program in LeBow College, which is built around a careful balance of business, general education, and accounting courses. Moreover, the abundant internship opportunities in Philadelphia would be an ideal way to sharpen my academic skills. Specifically, the program not only teaches advanced accounting knowledge, but also integrates that of business administration, which interests me substantially. Accounting is not merely about recording, but to find the best way to track the business operation, reflect financial condition and operation accomplishments. Successful accountants are able to balance the interests of the shareholder, creditors and managers well, and help maximize the enterprise's profit. Thus, for my graduate studies, I want to learn how to use financial information to analyze the operation conditions to provide feasible suggestion for the development of the enterprise.
So driven by my desire to achieve my objects and the unique program of Lebow College, I chose to attend Lebow, I sincerely thank you for your consideration, and I hope you find my confidence, ability and passion to be commensurate with the requirements and expectation of the program.
