Hoaduong2012
Jan 5, 2015
Writing Feedback / Concern about judging criminals with the death penalty [3]
Dear Bigger,
Below are some comments. Bold text means that I have no ideas about them but they sound weird. I hope that it may help you.
This essay is aimed to prove this by analyzing the impactto on the economy as well as life in prison in modifed world.
One thing that is of great significance is that having criminals in prison affects the economy in many ways.As an example that supports to support this view is that criminals in prison are the people who need to be cared regularly as long as they are released. Moreover, the government has to spent most of its money to prisoners by pirchasing meals, clothes and other ithems allocate part of its budget to offer prisoners meals, clothes and other items. Thw ovious flaw in this view is to maintain those criminals in prison. After analyzing this it is clear why serious criminals should not be kept alive.
Another, equally important fraction is that the life in prison is too soft. The most familiar example would be For instance, prisons in developed word countries are providing their prisoners with comfortable environment such as sport equipments equipment, TVs, and other facilities towards those criminals . There is absolutely no reason unjustified to create this enjoyable environment to those criminals as a human being does not have even if he does work. As a result, the number of criminals will not be declined unless those prisons exist.
Following the examination ofeconomical spendings government spending and softness of prison, we may draw the conclusion that serious criminals should not be saved or sent to prison, intead instead they must be sentenced to death. And, It is hoped Hopefully, these options will remain in the future.[/quote]
Dear Bigger,
Below are some comments. Bold text means that I have no ideas about them but they sound weird. I hope that it may help you.
This essay is aimed to prove this by analyzing the impact
One thing that is of great significance is that having criminals in prison affects the economy in many ways.
Another
Following the examination of