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Jan 5, 2015
Writing Feedback / Whenever something becomes too much for me, my mother is there calming me [3]

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Everyone has at least a person in life that admire. The person who is really special in my life is my mother.
She is very affectionate, loving, She is a big hearted , She instills tremendous amount of courage and confidence in us . on the other hand she is honest I always trust her and ready all the time to solve our problems. I wish I had the same kind of patience, capability of handling any situation.

I admire her because she is a very intelligent,Besides has many talents that I don't have. She tells me she is proud of me the always . Indeed Whenever something becomes too much for me, she is there calming me.

Finally i love and respect my mother for all these reasons, and for a lot more. I can find new friends to replace old ones, but i can't find another mother.
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