Writing Feedback / GRE: Teaching should be both a pull and push, where praise is given when the student does right [2]

Hey I just took the GRE 2 weeks ago and I got a 6 in the writing section. I think the best advice that I can give you is that you should either agree or disagree, even if you do not. You are more likely to get a 6 because you took only one side, making it harder to argue. Just something to think about though, you can obviously get a 6 if you write well and make valid points.

I am really not a great writer so advice is really all I can offer. I do think you can benefit more from transitioning in each paragraph. You seem to just start a new paragraph but you definitely need it to flow better.

Good luck!