dulguun
Jan 30, 2015
Undergraduate / Describe a group project or experience that required collaboration - Soccer [2]
My obsession with soccer taught me a lot of real life lessons. For the past few years have played
soccer as hobby, however I never thought soccer as only the game but real competition. Like all other people I was not a genius, I learned through trial and error. Criticized and scolded a lot, however my respect towards to my team members and friends never changed. I gained more knowledge every time then I apply to my game play. In regards to the basic ethics of teamwork, soccer has taught me to be a better individual overall. I have been better able to work with others while displaying the leadership skills that I learned in soccer. I believe that I also have learned to be more trustworthy of others, because I learned to trust my teammates in the heat of battle. Some of the ethics required for a successful soccer teams are true also in life: determination, teamwork, confidence, and a "never say die" attitude. Football has awoken these qualities in me.
Can any of you guys review my essay and give me some advice please.
Soccer Obsession
My obsession with soccer taught me a lot of real life lessons. For the past few years have played
soccer as hobby, however I never thought soccer as only the game but real competition. Like all other people I was not a genius, I learned through trial and error. Criticized and scolded a lot, however my respect towards to my team members and friends never changed. I gained more knowledge every time then I apply to my game play. In regards to the basic ethics of teamwork, soccer has taught me to be a better individual overall. I have been better able to work with others while displaying the leadership skills that I learned in soccer. I believe that I also have learned to be more trustworthy of others, because I learned to trust my teammates in the heat of battle. Some of the ethics required for a successful soccer teams are true also in life: determination, teamwork, confidence, and a "never say die" attitude. Football has awoken these qualities in me.
Can any of you guys review my essay and give me some advice please.
