aber96crombie
Feb 11, 2015
Undergraduate / A Responsible Citizen - Creative Personal Statement [2]
okay so,
1-I need help with the start and end, is it fine as it is below. or should I add to it what I'm writing later.
2- needs proofreading and add/delete suggestions.
so there is no certain topic. what they ask of above the text box is: Creative Space/Personal Statement.
I intend of it to be the Personal statement.
As a responsible citizen, I have always felt it my utmost duty to maintain equilibrium by contributing back to society. Be it something as simple as taking care of a sick bird, helping a senior citizen cross a road or even buying food for a fellow homeless being, I consider it my duty to help. The sense of accomplishment such an endeavor brings about is greater than any reward. Volunteering at The Citizens Foundation added fuel to my passion as I had an opportunity to not only explore and re-invent teaching methodologies, but also familiarize myself with the workings of an NGO. Every day I met young and impressionable minds - whose potential, if given a benign environment, was beyond anything I could have perceived. I realized that education is the greatest gift one can bestow upon society.
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okay so,
1-I need help with the start and end, is it fine as it is below. or should I add to it what I'm writing later.
2- needs proofreading and add/delete suggestions.
so there is no certain topic. what they ask of above the text box is: Creative Space/Personal Statement.
I intend of it to be the Personal statement.
As a responsible citizen, I have always felt it my utmost duty to maintain equilibrium by contributing back to society. Be it something as simple as taking care of a sick bird, helping a senior citizen cross a road or even buying food for a fellow homeless being, I consider it my duty to help. The sense of accomplishment such an endeavor brings about is greater than any reward. Volunteering at The Citizens Foundation added fuel to my passion as I had an opportunity to not only explore and re-invent teaching methodologies, but also familiarize myself with the workings of an NGO. Every day I met young and impressionable minds - whose potential, if given a benign environment, was beyond anything I could have perceived. I realized that education is the greatest gift one can bestow upon society.
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