vanyaramadhanty
Feb 18, 2015
Scholarship / Some think college is the end of the study, but in fact it's not true; Summer Pre-College Essay [2]
I would like to know whether this short essay is good enough? English is not my first language, and I am not too good in composing words so I'll need your help if there is something wrong or not good in my essay? and Can I make it to 3 Paragraphs?
This is my short essay, the thesis is study abroad:
Some people think college is the end of the study, but in fact they are wrong. The college is just the beginning of learning for your future. Going to college is a time for a new and exciting experience as well as time to explore various ideas and innovative. When I got into high school, I had been thinking about going to college, and I think about studying abroad.
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I would like to know whether this short essay is good enough? English is not my first language, and I am not too good in composing words so I'll need your help if there is something wrong or not good in my essay? and Can I make it to 3 Paragraphs?
This is my short essay, the thesis is study abroad:
Some people think college is the end of the study, but in fact they are wrong. The college is just the beginning of learning for your future. Going to college is a time for a new and exciting experience as well as time to explore various ideas and innovative. When I got into high school, I had been thinking about going to college, and I think about studying abroad.
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