Graduate / I graduated in June 2007 from Ain-Shams University holding a degree in Agriculture science [3]

holding a degree in Agriculture science, Excellent with First Honors with 87/100 = I think it should be having instead of holding , excellent
when my father worked an engineer there, and when he finished his work return to our country= my father was working an engineer there. When he finished his work we return

how to be success= how to success
In my college. I = In the college, I
Do feed formulation= make or design
We training = we trained
I applying = I am applying
.To work= ,to work

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