AndhineYellouw
Apr 7, 2015
Grammar, Usage / 1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge' - Grammar correction in sentences [5]
Dear all,
I am writing essay for scholarship, but I thought there are some confusing sentences which grammatically incorrect. Kindly help me to check pleasee :) Thanks alot, it means so much to me.
1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge about[/i] the complexity of biological systems
2. I decided to focus on genetics subject [i]which interest me most. By learning it, I had knowledge and then put more attention to diseases affected by genetics mutation.
3. work closely in health areas like working in the laboratorium or hospital.
4. I wished by working and also discovering the cause of many diseases
5. to work in health field strongly arised
6. At the time I was accompanying my mother at the hospital
7. I have had experience as a
8. had introduced me about the importance on encouraging healthy behaviours of people
9. To implementthese idea, I suggested to make wall magazine
10. Every activities we'd do needed a funding source routinely, it was included in publishing wall magazine weekly.
11. I invited other members to participate on music activity which we called ngamen,
12. that this kind of event would lead us to unite deeply in togetherness; and moreover in achieveing the same goal, get the financial source
Dear all,
I am writing essay for scholarship, but I thought there are some confusing sentences which grammatically incorrect. Kindly help me to check pleasee :) Thanks alot, it means so much to me.
1. Biology had given me the fundamental yet interesting knowledge about[/i] the complexity of biological systems
2. I decided to focus on genetics subject [i]which interest me most. By learning it, I had knowledge and then put more attention to diseases affected by genetics mutation.
3. work closely in health areas like working in the laboratorium or hospital.
4. I wished by working and also discovering the cause of many diseases
5. to work in health field strongly arised
6. At the time I was accompanying my mother at the hospital
7. I have had experience as a
8. had introduced me about the importance on encouraging healthy behaviours of people
9. To implementthese idea, I suggested to make wall magazine
10. Every activities we'd do needed a funding source routinely, it was included in publishing wall magazine weekly.
11. I invited other members to participate on music activity which we called ngamen,
12. that this kind of event would lead us to unite deeply in togetherness; and moreover in achieveing the same goal, get the financial source