Writing Feedback / People's activities have been changed as the way of serving food becomes an instant. [3]

In my opinion, your task is quite good but you maybe need to care some small things, such as:
+ Hence, I argue that eating such food affects to people's lifestyle.
+ By using the presto cooking tools, it helps the chef to reduce time for processingthat the bandeng bones becoming able to eat , namely presto process.

+ While in the past to make this dish some people need at least eight hours to make this dish in the pastand,now they can spentspend less time to become,nearly one hour, by using this tools.

+As a result, many a cooker in Semarang usinguse this tool for making the bandeng presto to reduce much time in cooking way.
+However, changedchanging our behaviour to eat fast food is not always good for our life.
+It is difficult for many cookersin nowadays to cook some food without using monosodium glutamate in order to make the foodbecome more delicious, whereas this substance brings many drawbacks to our life, such as tomake slowing down the children's development, tocreatedoing the damage to our brain, and tomakecausingmany a person become an obesity and, cancer and the other diseasesto many a person.

+On the other hand, many people are still using it since this flavour can give delicious taste to fast food; however, the people understand that it contains many poisonous substances causing some illness.

+It is clear forthat creating instant food needingssome special compounds but using this substance can bringmake a bad impact toon our life.
+To concludeIn conclusion, it seems to mebe that consuming fast food regularly can change lifestyle to get useful utensils for reducing cooking time; however, to create fast food, some people need to use additional flavour which is not good for consumer.

Here is only my private idea, so maybe it is not totally correct. Hope you all the best things!