Writing Feedback / Adults education and the reasons why grown-up people continue studying - IELTS [5]

Hi everyone, i am newbie in studying IELTS test. Could you help me review the wrting task 1 in Cambridge test 1, page 31? I don't know how to input the chart image of this task, maybe someone help me do that? Thanks everyone in advance.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart
shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people
think the costs of adult education should be shared.
Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

Below is my writing :