Yanxu
Mar 26, 2015
Writing Feedback / 'the history, tradition and way of life will vanish as well' - An essay on language extinction [2]
Hello! I'm preparing for IELTS, just finished this essay, some feedback is much appreciated!
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to a statistic done by the United Nation, Nowadays there are approximately 6500 languages spoken in the world. By the end of the 21st century, more than half of those will vanish.
This can be attributed to the natural process of globalisation, some people believe that everyone can benefit from the extinction of minority languages. In my opinion, language should be protected and preserved.
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Hello! I'm preparing for IELTS, just finished this essay, some feedback is much appreciated!
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
According to a statistic done by the United Nation, Nowadays there are approximately 6500 languages spoken in the world. By the end of the 21st century, more than half of those will vanish.
This can be attributed to the natural process of globalisation, some people believe that everyone can benefit from the extinction of minority languages. In my opinion, language should be protected and preserved.
[..]
