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Name: Abhaya Rathore
Joined: Mar 26, 2015
Last Post: Apr 1, 2015
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From: India
School: Apeejay School, Noida

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abhayarathore   
Apr 1, 2015
Graduate / Everyone has his own studying styles and preferences; one prefer to learn alone but other in a group [2]

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Everyone has their own studying styles and preferences; one can stay on track ‎individually, whileor one mayprefer to cooperate with a group for achieving best ‎results. One style is not necessarily better than the other, yet the student's ‎preference determines which approach is more beneficial.As a student, I can ‎concentrate on the concepts of a subject while I am studying alone, nevertheless the ‎assistance of friends could be advantageous as well.‎

It is considered that by studying individually , not only can you pace yourself, but ‎ you are also able to choose what to read; it means that the time, speed and material ‎of studying are definitely up to you. The other point is concentration; you might get disturbed in a group while you can focus on any type of subject much better when you ‎study on your own. In this way, neither you have to acclimatize yourself with others ‎nor waste your time with stuff you have already know.‎

On the other side of the coin, the group study has some advantages that cannot be ‎easily ignored. Speaking out loud in a group and trying to explain something you've ‎already struggled with can reinforce your knowledge. The more you repeat, the ‎further improvement is guaranteed on your retention. In a group, you could be ‎either the motivated or the motivator; you will grow by helping others and sharing your ‎knowledge.‎

After a consideration of each style in studying, I came to the conclusion that using both ‎the mentioned approaches could be helpful, yet it seems that individual studying outweighs ‎group onestudyfor the several advantages in many ways . Nonetheless, the way of study is poles apartvaries ‎from person to person whereby how comfortable they are learning method.and how comfortable they are with a learning method ‎ .
abhayarathore   
Apr 1, 2015
Writing Feedback / Mobile Phone's Market Share; BenQ fell significantly from 4.9% in 2005 to 2.4% in 2006 [2]

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The table gives information about the market share of worldwide mobile phone sales between 2005 and 2006, and it is measured in percentage. Clearly, it can be seen that while four mobile phone companies showed a decreased proportion of share, three others experienced anincreased figures within a year. However, Nokia's companyhad the highest market share in the world.

A closer look at the table reveals that in 2005, Motorola's market share was 17.7%, representing the third highest proportion in the world. This figure increased dramatically to 21.1% in 2006. A similar pattern was showed by Sony Ericsson. This company's market share increased slightly from 6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006. This company became the third least popular in 2006.

The proportion of BenQ Mobile's market share fell significantly from 4.9% in 2005 to 2.4% in 2006. This represented the lowest proportion of market share in 2006. In 2005, the percentage of Samsung's market share showed 12.7%. This figure decreased slightly by 11.8% in 2006, representing the fourth highest of global market share in the world.

Nokia was the most popular mobile phone brand] in the world, with the largest proportion. In 2005, Nokia's market share was 32.5%. This figure increased significantly to 35% in 2006.
abhayarathore   
Apr 1, 2015
Undergraduate / "You may play well or you may play badly; the important thing is that you should play truly" - NYU [2]

NYU is global, urban, inspired, smart, connected, and bold. What can NYU offer you, and what can you offer NYU? (200-400 words)

please give the feedback in the most honest way possible.

These words by Mikhail Shchepkin "You may play well or you may play badly; the important thing is that you should play truly",

which I first encountered in the book "An Actor Prepares" by Constantin Stanislavski gave me a fresh perspective on acting as it is in

the modern world. The very description of what goes into creating a life, internally and externally, is what makes acting an exciting,
challenging task, and a very fulfilling profession to me. A lot of people think that acting is about expression itself. But I somewhat
disagree with them, because it is more than just expression: I believe that it is an art, the art of creating a reality, which is so

believable that it can be indistinguishable from the real world.

At NYU, there are a lot of paths to choose from at the Tisch Drama Department. From The Meisner to Atlantic Acting School, I will

never run out of options. I believe that an actor possesses empathy and spontaneity, and I will bring these qualities during my time
at NYU. An actor takes upon the character's essence during a play, all the while sacrificing his own, which is possible only when we

try to understand how others feel, and when we accommodate other beliefs, along with ours. To promote this understanding of
human nature, is what I aspire to do at NYU. I will avail each opportunity which NYU provides, to interact with a global audience like

the Study Abroad programs.

After classes, I may practise with the New Music Ensemble or the NYU Contemporary Music Ensemble and expand my horizons in
music composition, or explore New York City and listen to the stories of its many inhabitants. Just like the motto for the State of New

York, "Excelsior" which means ever upward in Latin, I will always strive to perform better every time, and with NYU and the plethora

of opportunities it provides, I will always stay true to this motto.
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