Scholarship / How receiving an Endeavour Scholarship or Fellowship would make a difference to your personal life? [2]

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Please explain how receiving an Endeavour Scholarship or Fellowship would make a difference to your personal life.(200 words)

I strongly believe that receiving Endeavour Postgraduate Scholarship will help to achieve better career in the future and provide family benefits.

Successful applicant from this scholarship will be more attractive from employers as they can understand the merit-based competition nature. Furthermore, enhanced skills, knowledge and experience from Australia through service-learning, will be globally recognized by employers. From this, the employers can see a difference among the job applicants. At the same time, I can have more selective career that fit for my needs. Additionally, receiving this scholarship will reduce a financial barrier which will allow me to take meaningful work in particular volunteer opportunities and internships that can add value to my degree during study in Australia.

Besides, the scholarship will benefit family in both ways, direct and indirect. During study in Australia, family members can directly benefit to enhance English skills and learn multiple cultures through true environment. Moreover, when returning to home country after graduation, better career received resulted from the scholarship will sustain the family wealth which can also contribute to children education. More importantly, I can fully concentrate to my dedicated job in development without any disruption from family financial burden.

Scholarship / Details and evidence of voluntary service to the local community. Scholarship essay. [4]

Please provide details and evidence of your voluntary service to your professional/and or local community. This service must be outside of your work commitments. Only include voluntary service that has been undertaken in the last three years. (200 words)

I have been involved with variety of voluntary community service work such as surveillance for safety during the Asian Summit, anti drug and domestic violence. Notably, I participated in a campaign program called Let's Clean Up Vientiane in 2012 for two weeks as group leader. The campaign aimed to raise awareness about solid waste management among the youth focusing on separation by category and proper storage. The target groups of the activities were from primary, high schools, universities and households. My main roles were coordination with target groups and organizing activities including distribution of rubbish bag.

Moreover, in 2014, I volunteered to join the flooding protection program as a leader of youth ages between 16 and 25 in my community for three weeks. My main role was supervision of the team members and communication with other nearby communities to ensure the tasks has been properly done. The main activity in this program was to place sandbags on Mekong's riverbank to ensure that water would not overflow into the town and nearby communities nearby.

Both programs were short, but I am very satisfied with my small contribution with a great result of the work.